<p>Guys please grade my essay (but only if you truly can predict the score accurately) </p>
<p>reality shows essay</p>
<p>I disuccsed the positive aspects of reality shows: </p>
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<li><p>American Idol- I said that it inspires the average person to follow his or her dreams. I said that they see other people fulfil ltheir dreams; so if other people can do it hey can too. </p></li>
<li><p>Obese Camp- this show I said gives people the motivation they may have been looknin for to lose weight. The show demonstrates that exremelty obese peopel can lose weight; and therefore so can the viewer. </p></li>
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<p>My introduction and conclusion were pretty solid. And I used plenty of SAT words.. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>