<p>I did a practice, timed, essay and I'd like to see some scores/opinions/how I can improve!</p>
<p>-Out of the Blue Book- </p>
<p>Prompt: "To change is to risk something, making us feel insecure. Not to change is a bigger risk, though we seldom feel that way. There is no choice but to change. People, hwoever, cannot be motivated to change from the outside. All of our motivation comes from within." Adapted from Ward Sybouts...</p>
<p>Assignment: What motivates people to change? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations. </p>
<p>PM me please? I would so greatly appreciate it! :)</p>