Had to write college essay in AP Lang... Can anyone review it?

Hey everyone. The week before finals in my AP Lang class, our teacher gave us tips on writing our application essays, and our final homework was to actually write the essay. I actually forgot about it until the night before it was due, and I seriously rushed it. However, much to my delight and surprise, my teacher loved it and gave it the only 100 in all her classes.

I honestly didn’t like it. I chose a typical topic that wasn’t something I truly cared about but was easy to write since I had very little time to write a good essay. However, if my teacher, who is a notoriously difficult grader, actually liked it, maybe I could use it for my common app (of course with a little modification). I’m still not a fan of the topic though… idk

Would anyone mind giving their thoughts on it in a PM? Thank you!

You can pm it to me

I’d read it also.

I’d be willing to read it!