Help Edit My UC Personal Statement Essays

Applying to College
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<p>Would anyone mind to read and edit my UC personal statement essays? I wrote my first draft and it seems somehow incoherent. It would be great if people gave me feedback. </p>

<p>If you want to help me out, please PM me and I'll send you the documents! Thanks!</p>

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<p>yea, ill take a look, PM em</p>

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<p>I'd love to look at it! PM it to me too :)</p>

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<p>yea I'll read it. email me <a href="mailto:slam_2kool@hotmail.com">slam_2kool@hotmail.com</a></p>

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<p>i'll help out. i'm really good at grammar and rhetoric</p>

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<p>Is it true that the UC system might change up their essay topic from last years? My english teacher gave us last year's essay topics and said they are subject to change. Anyone have an idea if they will change it or not?</p>

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<p>i can take a look at it and give you as much tips as i can. just send a PM.</p>

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<p>PM it to me by sunday, I will be able to look over your essay</p>

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<p>You can pm me...</p>

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<p>Thanks for everyone's help!</p>