<p>Strengths: Vocab is good and less overdone than your other essays in this thread. Thesis is strong, specific literary examples are great, etc.</p>
<p>Suggestions:
Make sure you don't get too caught up in "intelligent" sentences... because it seems like you sacrifice clarity and efficiency of grammar/structure for elaborate vocabulary (although like I said before, this is better than it was). A good example of this is your second sentence... while I know what you're trying to say, the way you said it is very awkward structurally.</p>
<p>Another thing you might want to try is to give examples from other areas of life, and not just literature... you can still have valid, solid proof for a thesis even if it isn't from literature. Maybe some science or history, whatever you're familiar with.</p>
<p>P.S. I think "the word" is amenities.... hahaha.</p>