<p>I'm applying to Harvard, and I am adapting my Yale supplemental essay (which as 499 words out of a possible 500 words) to suit the "Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences" essay which is a maximum of 150 words. I love writing and would consider myself somewhat skilled at it... EXCEPT in the area of concision. So, please help me out?</p>
<p>I'll PM you my essay if you comment, and I'll read yours in return. General comments and feedback on my essay are okay too, but I primarily just need help cutting it down. Every little bit counts!</p>
<p>Thank you; cheers!</p>