Help me edit my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>Would anyone be willing to help me with my essay? It's for the CommonApp and is my first draft. It's a bit over the limit, around 650 and I need help editing it.</p>

<p>Please and thanks =)</p>

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<p>i would lurve to.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to read it. My mother is an english teacher, with your indulgance, i could show it to her. Also, would you mind reading mind, just finished it tonight.</p>

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<p>I would like to read your's Adam, you can pm it over.</p>

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<p>i'm down to edit anyone's draft</p>

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<p>Ill read it</p>

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<p>sure pm it over</p>