Help me formulate a personal statement

<p>I need this for the common application. I'm not applying anywhere selective, so I'm not posting a resume or anything fancy. This is basically what I want to write. I don't know how to put it, though:</p>

<p>During the beginning of high school I was not focused on academics and I slacked. However, I had a wake up call halfway through sophomore year. Since then I have improved my study habits, made better grades, and now am taking a rigorous schedule. yada yada</p>

<p>That's what I basically want to state (I've already said good characteristics and stuff in the essays). It doesn't have to be long. I just want to mention my upward trend. Also, is there anything else I should put in the personal statement? I really can't think of anything. Any questions feel free to ask. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>for help buy how to write a personal statement book or borrow it from the library…
All I could help you with is by telling to just explain how you went through your own little renassiance and you are a changed person. State what your goals will be …and explain any problems you had during the beginning of your high school career. However, I do not know you and the best thing you can do is write your essay…the way you think best…and show it to someone you trust.</p>