Help on cutting down words in my UC Essays!

<p>I am over 89 words for the 1000 word count limit. If there's anyone willing to help me down with their perspective please post and I'll PM back! Everything seems important to me from my subjective view ;/. Thank you!</p>

<p>Bump Bump!</p>

<p>Sure, I’d help :3 Conciseness is one of the first things I look for in an essay, so I can help you with that. I also already submitted mine earlier in the week, so no problem.</p>

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<p>Make sure you look at that tip though, helped me a ton.</p>