Help on Tuft's essay "Who are you?"

<p>Heres the Prompt:Self-identity and personal expression take many forms. Tastes in music, food and clothing can make a statement while politics, religion and ethnicity often act as defining attributes. Buttons on your backpack; a tattoo; the blogs you read and the web sites you visit; the minutia on your refrigerator or the doodles on your notebook are clues to your passions and viewpoints. Are you a vegetarian? Do you prefer YouTube or test tubes? Are you the drummer in an all-girl rock band? Do you like to tinker? Are you the umpire or the pitcher? Use the richness of your identity to give us insight: Who are you?</p>

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<p>I talked to my best friend about this cause sometimes its hard to be introspective and this is what we came up with</p>

<p>Hate cloudy weather
Analytical
Fun/funny
Widely known because of the way I act/my friendliness
Love all music except country
Love sushi
(5:10:25 PM) B*<strong><em>: someone who will assume a leadership position
(5:10:49 PM) B</em></strong><em>: may not be the best, but will help lead others to help them become the best
(5:11:34 PM) B</em><strong><em>: Someone that another will feel secure with having you on their side for they know that you get the job done
(5:12:44 PM) B</em></strong><em>: not afraid to question something that everyone else wouldn’t
(5:21:22 PM) B</em><strong><em>: trying to think of others
(5:21:31 PM) B</em></strong><em>: someone who wants to meet everyone he can
(5:21:51 PM) B</em>***: /wants to affect as many as ya can
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right now im just stuck on how i should start/write this thing....i cant continuously say "im someone who _</em></strong>
_" etc</p>

<p>help/comments please?</p>

<p>bump bump bump
hmmmm</p>

<p>Is there something about you that represents who you are? Though I'm not applying to Tufts, I would probably choose my list of bookmarks or favorite books or TV channels or SOMETHING. I would suggest using a physical object to represent those different aspects of yourself - kind of like an extended metaphor essay. But that's just one take.</p>

<p>can anyone read it/ give me comments/ criticism.... I wrote it in a weird way, so can anyone help me/give me an opinion?</p>

<p>sry about these bumps, i really need some help though...soo</p>

<p>bump</p>

<p>i'll read your essay, and we can swap, i already submitted mine.</p>

<p>sure.. whhy not.. pm me if you want. im not applying to tufts.</p>

<p>for this essay, are they looking more for a list or for you to expand on a couple of specific things more extensively? (I'm attempting to write mine, too)</p>

<p>I thought that it was just such a ridiculous task (it was 200 words to tell WHO YOU ARE, right???), that I completely turned it into a joke. That's actually what I did with all of my short answer questions for all of my colleges because it was just stupid. I can't describe who I am in 200 words. Hell, I couldn't describe myself in UNLIMITED space! Tufts can suck it as far as I'm concerned. I don't even like that school anymore (and I'm serious). I did write a hella good essay for the optional though..... With Tufts, I have more of a love/hate relationship. :)</p>

<p>I was going to write that before I realized I'm applying to Tufts through a different application process. My initial thought was to say something to effect of I'm a teenager, I'm going to college and continuing my life to figure out who I am, the entire process of life is trying to figure out who you are, it's naive and borderline egotistical for me to believe I know all there is to know about myself or how I view a world I've barely experienced. Basically refusing to answer the question and actively going after it. Probably wouldn't have been a good idea, though. :P</p>

<p>i will read yours. email me. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Does it strictly have to be 200 words or under? </p>

<p>Or does Tufts allow some leeway?</p>

<p>pm me. ill take a look</p>

<p>It does not strictly have to be 200 or under. The word count is a suggestion to keep in mind. If you're sending in 800, that's too much. Be rational.</p>

<p>Haha, I was writing the essays for Tufts then I just removed it from my common App college list about two days ago...:(</p>

<p>LMAO, seems like a lot ppl got stuck with Tufts essay.</p>