They look good don’t get me wrong, but for ivies I don’t see anything that really stands out as extraordinary. When it comes to ivies you really need to show them that you are focusing on what you love and putting your time into it. I’m not saying you have to find the holy grail or a cure for caner, but it just seems like you have a few different, unrelated club positions here and there. I’m sure many others would consider them excellent but for ivies it’s good to have extracurriculars that reflect your deep interests and involve the community.