<p>I realize this is a lot to ask but would anybody mind reading my personal essay for "Why Penn?" It would be a lot of help because the only people I have to read it are my family, and well obviously they can be a bias party.
Also, if you could get back to me by tomorrow with corrections that would really be appreciated. Sorry and thank you.</p>
<p>Alright, I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>Ill read it 
I’ll murder ur paper!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look as well if you’d like</p>
<p>That would be wonderful. I’m sorry I’m new to the system. Do I just private message you guys with the essay?</p>
<p>Yeah, send a private message to each individual person. :] Send me it as well, I’ll help you. (I’m not applying to Penn, so we’re not competition.)</p>
<p>I can take a look.</p>