<p>Well I'm very confused of the style of the essays.....Do we need a 3-paragraph structure in order to write a good essay? (like intro, body and conclusion, each has a topic sentense at the beginning?) I wonder if this looks stereotyped...so can you give me any advice? thanks so much~^_^</p>
<p>PS. Are there anyone can read my essay for me~~?</p>
<p>Yeah, I recommend to not use a 'typical' structure. Everything should still make sense and flow, but it doesn't have to be like an academic paper. </p>
<p>...Just seconding enderkin's opinion.</p>
<p>I can read it- Pm it to me whenever you're ready.</p>