HELP with college essay!

<p>can anyone help me with my college essay. im stuck and i dont know whta to write next.
its about my trip to france last summer that changed my life.</p>

<p>Don’t have time to read essays at the moment, but I can tell you that the topic sounds cliche. If you’re going to say something was life-changing, you need to be able to back that up. And it needs to be an extraordinary trip.</p>

<p>it was an extraodinary trip. i had won a scholarship to attend a cooking and language program in france for 5 weeks, while living with 20 strangers from around the world.</p>