<p>so i kind of have writers block and i dont know what else to write. so if you could so gladly take your time and help me. i had written another thread about it but one one guy answered and he said it was too cliche and it needed to be extra ordinary. i guess i didnt make my self clear enough. it was an extraordinary trip where i won a scholarship to france for 5 weeks to a cooking and language program and i would be staying with 20 strangers from around the world. soo can you help?</p>
<p>That sounds extra ordinary. If he said it was cliche, he might have a thing against French food.
Most important thing to remember when writing an essay about such an experience: SHOW, don’t tell. Readers don’t want to read about it, they want to be stuck in the moment. Make sure you sound as sincere as possible, and write about what this experience did for you as well as the experience itself.</p>