Help with my Common App essay please??

<p>Hello,
Would anyone be willing to read my common app essay? I could send it to you via private message. Would help me a lot, just want to make sure it is good before sending it off. Please, reputable CC members only. My essay is EXTREMELY specific and so there would be no way anyone else could use it. Be as blunt as necessary in your feedback, any help is great.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the advice.</p>

<p>I’m available. PM me.</p>