<p>Hey everyone! I'm starting to write my supplemental essay on the first topic (reinvent your high school). However, i'm kind of confused about how i should format the essay. Should i state what i wished was better and state how to improve it? or what? Thanks for any help!</p>
<p>Really, any format is fine as long as you convey what you believe. My essay on that topic was more literary, identifying an inherent problem with the school and describing it in abstract first, then specific. My only advice would be to stay away from something too school like (ie, "The problem I have is... The solution I have is...") because it's not as appealing to read. Good luck! I'd love to read your essay, if you need someone to read.</p>
<p>it would be easier if you did the second topic.</p>
<p>^ but not nearly as fun...</p>
<p>lol....that was pretty good</p>
<p>thanks for the replies. Thanks debatechic for the offer too. I'll send it over when i finish a good draft. Congrats on getting accepted!</p>
<p>Can anyone look over my essay for the reinvent topic?</p>
<p>i dont think my conclusion was too strong but im sure the beginning was very enjoyable</p>