Hello guys, I have some cliche statements that I need help rewording/rephrasing. Any help is appreciated.
“I have always loved school because I enjoy learning new things.”
“How am I different from other applicants?”
“There is no way out of…”
My affinity for school stems from my insatiable curiosity
What separates me from my peers?
Not sure what you are trying to say in third
@rofikicafe
I meant to say:
“There is no way out of the cycle of poverty.”
“Breaking the cycle of poverty.”
I also need help with this:
“I want to make a difference”
“a strong community”
“an indestructible bond among students”
“With a focused mindset,…”
“I have learned many traits that positively impacted my academic performance.”
Thanks for the help!
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