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College Essays
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<p>can someone critic my essay for college. i must apply by december 1 and want to hear peoples honest opinions about my essay no matter how bad it is.. thanks in advance</p>

<p>the topic: "describe an intellectual experience that mattered to you most"</p>

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<p>bump... its in the first half of the first draft stage O.o</p>

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<p>-cough-.... anyone? =/ draft done.... due in 3 weeks....<em>tumbleweed</em></p>