Helppp uf college essayyy

<p>can someone help edit my college application essay?! its in response to the uf essay prompt!! "In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service." email me and I will show you!</p>