<p>I'm taking Oct SAT and my model tests score around 2000
I'm aiming 2200+ till this Dec.
And english is not my first language so if you please mark the grammar errors, that would be great too.</p>
<p>Here's my essay,
if you please grade it, it would be so helpful. thanks XD</p>
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<p>Compose an essay in which you express your view on this topic.</p>
<p>:Nurture(one's genetic inheritance) affects one's character and behavior more than nature(one's life experience)</p>
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<p>People are born with unique specialities. They get those specialities from their parents; in other words, they are the nature of people themselves. The nature strongly influences on a person's behavior or characteristic until he gets education or life experiences. It is the nurture that sculptures and finishes the shape of the characteristic. Therefore I believe that nuture affect one's character more than nature does.</p>
<p>First, parents and environment affect a lot to the kids. For example, a baby who is friendly and social in their young ages can turn into recluses due to the effects of environment such as the parent's divorce. Those matters that they experience throughout the life can distort or brighten up their behavior easily. </p>
<p>Second, an education has strong impacts on the kids. Education starts from the birth and lasts till death. A kid with violent nature can behave well by having education. Parents or the teachers from the kindergarten lesson them how to behave nice to friends and talk rather than act violently. For example, one fo my friends was once a kid who threw away everything when something bothers her. After all, she went through los of social groups such as schools and youth groups and turned into a mature lady. </p>
<p>Third, what nature affects the kid has the limit. If one insists that nature has more impact on a kid, one overlooks one of the numerous counterexamples that disprove one's thesis. A murderer's kids are not murderers as their parents. Or all murderers' parents are not murderers. If nature really affects the characteristic more than the nurture, how is this happened? The experience strengthen or tame the nature to fit the society that a person can behave right.</p>
<p>Certainly, nature has somewhat effects on the person's behavior and characters. They are natural and unindiluted. However, what nature offers is the basis of the kids' characteristics; what a kid builds upon it differs through his/her experiences and decisions.</p>