<p>so hopefully the title conveyed my current level of desperation. would anyone (preferably an adult or someone already in college) like to look over my common app essay? i'm just.. not happy with it. not to mention the fact that i can't get it below 603 words.</p>
<p>thank you so much!</p>
<p>if it helps, i'm applying to (in order of preference): barnard, gw, nyu, mount holyoke, american, smith, bryn mawr, uvm, umass amherst.
:)</p>