Hit a giant wall. Critic my essay please?

<p>Would anyone be willing to look over my essay? I really need help less with technical things but more with content. I've hit a massive (like enormous) creative wall and for the life of me I can't figure out whether or not my essay makes sense or even appropriate to send to a college. Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. Feel free to PM me with the prompt.</p>

<p>I will read and give feedback, if you’d like an adult opinion.</p>