<p>I am having trouble with the first UC prompt...I don't know what I am missing or need to work on, but my essay definitely needs some work. If anyone is willing to read and critique it, I would really appreciate it!</p>
<p>My second essay is almost finished (or at least I think). My friends have told me that it is too much description and not that much analysis...If you could give me feedback on that, that would be great as well ><</p>
<p>Pick which one you'd like to critique? >< Thank you so much!!</p>