hmm...essay advice?

<p>So I'm working on my common app essay. I talked about an experience I had as a child. Basically, the entire thing revolves around the fact that I'm an idealist. I look at things and see that there is potential to excel. I was going to relate it back to my dancing, tutoring, and daily life and how it defines me...do you think this is a good route or not? I'm just afraid that the term "idealist" might be misconstrued to mean that I'm just a major perfectionist/overachiever. Thoughts?? Ah, I'm so sick of writing essays!</p>

<p>Bump…please help me!!!</p>

<p>I’m sure this isn’t the answer you’re looking for, but it’s all in how you write the essay. Get several people to read it over, and keep revising until you’re happy with it.</p>

<p>i’ll read over your essay, you could read over mine. just pm me.</p>