Essay HELP! Please

Applying to College
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<p>Hey I've already written two essays: 1 common app and 1 for UMich.</p>

<p>However, I feel as though the 1 I wrote for common app is impersonal. I plan on writing a new one, but have no idea what to write it on. The rest of my app already illustrates my drive for business, so I need to write about something totally the opposite of it to reveal my personality. </p>

<p>Here are some topics I've been brainstorming:</p>

<p>My dedication to weightlifting (not professionally...but to stay fit and healthy)</p>

<p>My Favorite Color (saw this topic on an application)</p>

<p>What I would change about the view when I step out of my house (seems like a good way to reveal my personality)</p>

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<p>Can't really think of anything else. I want to spend a good amount of time on it because its the clincher I need for most of my schools since my GPA/SAT scores are low. Please provide any ideas you have either on here or through PM. Thanks</p>

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<p>Bump ----------- New idea that I might go with...being a male dancer (no not a stripper lol). Going to portray me waiting to be called up to perform at India Day Parade then recollecting on my childhood where it all started..where I used to cry but my parents pushed me, but as I got older it became my own and not my parents, etc. What do you think></p>