<p>The prompt asks for what my intellectual ideas are and how they grew and THEN asks how Cornell would fit into that.</p>
<p>I have about 4 paragraphs on what I want to do and why its significant for me and how it has grown (research, coursework, etc.). I then have one paragraph talking about specific classes at Cornell and its faculty in the field that I want to pursue. Ultimately, the "Why Cornell" portion is only like 1/4 of my total essay, as it is my concluding paragraph. Can anyone help me? Is this enough?</p>