How my hometown led me to want more!! Please scrutinize my essay!

<p>I just wrote my essay for NYU and I am looking for some critiques before I give it to my AP Lit. teacher to degrade, lol. </p>

<p>Any readers up for the task.</p>

<p>Be brutal; I can take it. :)</p>

<p>Sure, I'll take a look. I'll be as brutal as I can. PM me.</p>