<p>I was going to post this question in the College Essay section, but it seems that most of that section is comprised of posts where people want their essays read. </p>
<p>Okay, so the question: When writing a "person of influence" essay, is it okay to mainly focus on the person of influence in the essay and then show how it ties to yourself at the end (very strong tie)? Or, would is it better to try to talk about yourself more in the essay?</p>