<p>Hi everyone! I'm applying to HYS, so I need to have the strongest essays possible. Is anyone interested in reading my Common App essay and telling me what you think of it so far? Looking for pretty in depth analysis if possible. If you're applying to HYS, please don't ask to read although I appreciate your help :)!</p>
<p>I can take a look, if you deem me worthy enough :P</p>
<p>I’ll send you a PM! I hope my original post didn’t come off as condescending.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I’m not applying to any Ivies, except (maybe) Cornell.</p>
<p>I am a parent, not applying anywhere 
I’m happy to read and give feedback.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help out if you still need it – not applying to any Ivies except maybe Penn 
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<p>I can read it you want. </p>
<p>I can read ! </p>
<p>Yo</p>
<p>I’d be happy to critique</p>
<p>I’ll happily read and critique if you still need that! (I’m a senior, so if that makes you uncomfortable, then know in advance)</p>
<p>I’d like to read it and give any advice/feedback that I can as well… feel free to PM me!</p>
<p>I’m a junior who has a bit of free time right now. Shoot me a pm if you’re in the mood :)</p>
<p>Sent PM outs! Thank you.</p>
<p>Also, here is my Chance Me thread if you wanted to chance me. Gives some insight into my essay.</p>
<p><a href=“Rising Senior to HYS + Others - Chance Me / Match Me! - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/what-my-chances/1657297-rising-senior-to-hys-others-p1.html</a></p>
<p>I am a parent and will be happy to take a look</p>
<p>I just entirely finished my common app essay! A fresh set of eyes would be wonderful.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind reading them. </p>
<p>So far a lot of criticism on my last CA essay, I started from scratch. Am looking for readers for this new one! Thanks.</p>
<p>I can take a look if you want!</p>
<p>I’m happy to read as well.</p>