<p>can someone tell me what kind of score I’ll probably get on this essay? I did it in response to a Barron’s SAT practice book prompt, and I feel like it’s really weak; I can’t write a good essay in less than three days, let alone 25 minutes, so I know this is horrible and if there’s any tips you guys have for me that would be greatly appreciated. SAT in two days!! </p>
<p>prompt: “the novelist John Hersey wrote that learning starts with failure and that the first failure is the beginning of education.” what are your thoughts on the idea that failure is necessary for education to take place? provide examples based on your studies and/or experience. </p>
<p>here’s what I wrote (true story): </p>
<p>There is a Latin saying that “experience, when. bought with pain, teaches.” John Hersey’s statement is but a reiteration of what the ancient Romans already had established as a truth. Both the Romans and Hersey are essentially the forefathers of the pedestrian adage, “learn from your mistakes.” </p>
<p>Failure does, indeed, seem to be the basis not for education, but for actual learning. In elementary school, we are taught the basic mechanisms of schooling through rote memorization; this type of “education”, however, is not synonymous with the actual learning we garner through our experiences. For example, this past summer I was accepted to the governor’s school for information technology leadership. Overjoyed as I was when I got there, I forgot that it was still school and did not think that something so frivolous as frisbee-playing twenty minutes after curfew could get me expelled – but it did. Three other girls and I were forced to kiss the opportunity of our lives goodbye. if that wasn’t painful, I don’t know what pain is. if that wasn’t failure in the eyes of my parents, then never have I failed them. The experience did teach me that accepting responsibility for my mistakes wasn’t synonymous with solving them, and that rules are rules, not suggestions – both things I’d been told my entire life, but that I hasn’t learned until then. </p>
<p>Without a grain of salt, no advice is ever truly taken. Similarly, any lesson, if it is to be ingrained in our minds, will not be successfully incorporated until it is given a reason to do so, even If that reason is nothing more than to avoid failure or pain.</p>