would someone please read my essays and tell me what they think?

<p>My essays could make me or break me. I need to get somebody's opinions on them...or at least one of them, if you have the time. </p>

<p>Would anyone who knows stuff about the content of college essays (who has nothing better to do) want to step forward, read mine, and possibly help me to get into college? Sorry if there's already a place to do this, I'm new here.</p>

<p>PM me and I'll try to give some advice.</p>

<p>PM--I'll take a look as well. It'll also be helpful if you could elaborate on your circumstance and specifics. (essays, from what I've heard, are viewed as part of the 'whole person')</p>

<p>pm me also--what college?</p>

<p>I'll critique it. PM me.</p>

<p>i'm at school right now, and i went to bed before i could see these responses. i will pm you guys the essays when i get home.</p>

<p>i'm applying to Emerson EA, i'll send you my "profile" in the pm.</p>

<p>sure, pm me</p>

<p>sure I will read it for you. I just finished mine and sent it.</p>

<p>ill gladly read yours!! just PM it =)</p>