<p>My essays could make me or break me. I need to get somebody's opinions on them...or at least one of them, if you have the time. </p>
<p>Would anyone who knows stuff about the content of college essays (who has nothing better to do) want to step forward, read mine, and possibly help me to get into college? Sorry if there's already a place to do this, I'm new here.</p>
<p>PM--I'll take a look as well. It'll also be helpful if you could elaborate on your circumstance and specifics. (essays, from what I've heard, are viewed as part of the 'whole person')</p>