I have an essay four that I can't decide upon...

<p>I'm really confused about this essay! I can't tell if it's really good or if it really sucks. Right now, I'm leaning towards the latter. If any admitted students or not Chicago RD people want to read it over and tell me if it does or does not suck, that'd be much appreciated.</p>

<p>PM it to me. I got accepted early action.</p>