I REALLY want someone to read my essay and give me feedback!

Chance Me / Match Me!
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<p>Only one person replied to my last post and I've seen similar posts with pages of responses, so I'm reposting. </p>

<p>I wrote this essay last year for a summer program. I'm really kind of torn about it. I'm not in love with it, but at the same time I'm not really sure what's wrong with as it's original and for the most part pretty grammatically sound. Any opinions on it would be really awesome! Just pm if you want to read it and give feedback! I really want some feedback! Thanks</p>

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<p>feedback requires reading it. and if you've already forgotten it I'm not sure how you came to your other two conclusions.</p>

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<p>haha yeah I have no idea what's wrong with him...he's practically spamming this forum. I've never done this before, but you can PM me and I'll read it if you want =)</p>

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<p>I wouldn't do it. Don't read each other's essays! BE YOURSELF.</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>You can PM me</p>