<p>hi i need help with an essay. it is about 530 words. i need someone to read it (it's a quick read) and tell me if it makes sense. thanks in advance, i will PM it to you if you post.</p>
<p>i am wondering if it is possible to use this essay as my common application essay under "topic of my choice" because it is a generic personal essay about who I am.
will it look bad if i use that choice? please only comment if you know for sure...</p>
<p>sure, i'll review it</p>
<p>i'll read it too</p>
<p>If you need another person to review it, send it my way.</p>
<p>thanks, i'm sending it to you all now</p>
<p>i'm only a freshman but i'd like to get an idea of what one would look like. If you can email it to <a href="mailto:Matthew654321@aol.com">Matthew654321@aol.com</a> i'd appreciate it, if not just pm it i'll get it</p>
<p>if you want you can pm one to me too</p>
<p>go ahead and pm me and i'll review it.</p>
<p>I'll read.</p>
<p>i know you got a lot of responses but u can pm me as well!</p>
<p>I do too... if you want even more feedback!</p>
<p>i would love to read it; i'm really great at finding and correcting grammatical and content errors!</p>
<p>ya sure i'd read your essay if u want to send it still.</p>