<p>I've written an essay about, uh, I guess you'd call it a "trivial" topic.</p>
<p>But hey, it actually has had a pretty damn big influence on me, and it was by far what was easiest to write about. I guess I want feedback on its execution--you could write a profound story about a trip to the bathroom if you execute it well enough IMO. </p>
<p>So if you're willing to help me out a bit, I'd really appreciate it. Let me know if you'd like to oh-so-generously volunteer to give my essay a read-through. It's the CoApp prompts about a time you challenged a belief--which brings me to another question: I'm a bit "iffy" about whether or not I even answered the prompt. I don't OUTRIGHT restate the question and all that boringness, but the reader can delve a bit deeper to see how I challenged a community. </p>
<p>Oh, well, you'll let me know, won't you? :) pls.</p>