Critique my Common App essay? Will critique yours back! :)

College Essays
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<p>The Common App prompt I am using is: "Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?"</p>

<p>I started writing my essay weeks ago and I feel like even though I have a really good story to tell, the writing itself doesn't seem very captivating. I would love to have your opinion on it and maybe some suggestions. </p>

<p>PM me if you're interested. And I'll read yours too, if you want. :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’m a mom so you won’t have to read mine in return :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me too, & you don’t have to read mine back lol</p>

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<p>PM me too! But u will have to read mine back. Lol :D</p>

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<p>I can read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look and critique thoroughly.</p>