Unique, Introspective Common App Essay That's Better Than Yours Needs Critiquing!

College Essays
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<p>Did I get your attention? It's a funny story involving inspiration by Mary Poppins…. and is the following prompt:</p>

<p>"Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?"</p>

<p>I ask for your general thoughts and whatever else you have to offer. </p>

<p>I can also do a little trade and help you if you need it.</p>

<p>Please PM me if you're interested. Thanks.</p>

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<p>Hey I’ll read it! I’m usually pretty good at critiquing essays :)</p>

<p>(also good at ruining your dreams and making you cry)</p>

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<p>I’ll read and critique it. :slight_smile: I’ve applied to college already and written plenty better than yours :P</p>

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<p>Np!</p>

<p>pm me.</p>