I think my essay is Unique. Anyone willing to read?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Brown University
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<p>I’m really nervous about this because:

  1. i’ve been working on this everyday for 2 weeks
  2. it took me 4 weeks to come up with this idea
  3. i think it’s unique but im afraid others will think it’s garbage
    4)i don’t want anyone to steal the essay (so no one who’s applying this year)</p>

<p>Would anyone like to read it? (it’s short–> about 450 words) I’d love to go to Brown; i visited, loved the atmosphere, and really think i could happily explore my interests there. I want my essay to be as good as possible so be as hard on it as you see fit.</p>

<p>*I think i might add a little to it but id still like opinions on it now.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.
i’m not applying to brown this year.
pm it :]</p>

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<p>ill read it, PM me</p>

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<p>Thanks guys. pm’ed it</p>

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<p>Hey there. I applied to Brown last year with an essay that I also thought was extremely unique :smiley:
In fact my grades probably weren’t the best and my SATs were quite average but I felt like I really put my soul into the essay. Then I was rejected :frowning:
So who knows what the acdoms like! hahahha
However I was then accepted to Princeton … So I guess someone liked it.
ANyways this is a long winded way of saying PM me!
and Good Luck.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I just finished mine for Cornell</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, as im interested in applyin to brown as an international student, but wont be doing so for another 3 years, as i am going to finish my current degree here and do some work with it… :frowning: its depressin cause i really love brown also!! :smiley: so id love to read it, and i rocked in english, only 3 people got an A1 in english in my school- a year of 300. and i was one of them! so i think i could be useful… :D</p>

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<p>I’d love to read your essay and provide feedback. I’m applying to Brown as a transfer student… but not until Fall 2011. :)</p>

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<p>Thanks everybody! I pm’ed you all</p>

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<p>PM me if you still need another reader. I’ll do it asap!!</p>

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<p>sorry i took so long. i just pm’ed it</p>

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<p>pm if u need another reader. just sent in my ed app today! phew. now i cant wait till dec 15th</p>

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<p>Ill read it if you want.</p>

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<p>PM- I’ll read if you liked. Sounds interesting, I hate boring papers.
– not applying to brown.</p>

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<p>pm me! i’m not applying to brown either :d</p>

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<p>Thanks guys i pm’ed you</p>

<p>~I don’t need any more readers right now, but thank you to those who are willing to help me.</p>

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<p>sure, i’d love to read it and give some feedback =D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>