I think my Yale essay is a bit risky, anyone willing to read it?

College Essays
1

<p>just reply. </p>

<p>and preferably, admits or non 09ers.</p>

2

<p>sure, just PM it on over</p>

3

<p>anyone else?</p>

4

<p>Got rejected by Yale EA. pm me if you want</p>

5

<p>PM me if you like. I’m applying too but I’ve written about 6 essays already.</p>

6

<p>Pm me if you want…I can read and critique</p>