I wrote this essay in 25 minutes. Is it good enough?

Transfer Students
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<p>Since I'm so great with time, I left my CA essay for the last minute. The deadlines for Uchicago, Brown, Vandy, and Wellesley are tomorrow. My supplements are Ok, except maybe Uchi, but my CA essay is pretty rough? Anyone want to tear them apart with comments that will make the essay heart-stoppingly amazing?</p>

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<p>If you want I’ll read them, but to be fair to you I’m letting you know that I am applying to Uchicago and Vandy as well, but have already submitted their my apps and supplements :D</p>

<p>It would be fine if you said you didn’t feel comfortable.</p>

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<p>w/e. i won’t send you my uchi essays because i think they are already as good as they can get, but the ca essay needs work.</p>

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<p>lol, ok.</p>

<p>Pm me the essay, I am going to sleep soon so try to hurry</p>

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<p>PMed.check inbox</p>

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<p>you can pm me too. I’m only applying to Stanford and Cornell.</p>

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<p>Pmed it to u riley</p>

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<p>you can pm me too</p>

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<p>pmed. check inbox.</p>

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<p>you can pm me too</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. PM</p>