I wrote this in like 15 minutes and would appreciate some feedback

<p>I just finished my first supplement essay, but I didn't spend too much time on it. I'm wondering if it's really any good, so I could use some feedback. Send me a message if you're interested! It's a "why _________ college?" essay for Rhodes. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Anyone out there? I’m honestly curious as to whether or not this is a good, quick first attempt or absolutely terrible. Thanks!</p>

<p>hi! i’ll attempt to help</p>

<p>I’d be happy to take a look</p>

<p>Il take a look</p>

<p>Sure</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me.</p>