Need someone to read and comment on my "Why Rhodes" essay.

<p>Hi everyone,
I finished my "Why Rhodes". So I really appreciate if someone can read my essay and tell me how do you think about it. Leave me a message with your email.
Nice day to you, guys.
Best,
NHG.</p>

<p>My email: <a href="mailto:red_ivy91@yahoo.com">red_ivy91@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>@ giang1961991, Whistle Pig, rfwcphs1: Check your mailbox, I sent you my essay.</p>

<p>I'd be glad to help. Please email me. Don't PM. Thanks</p>

<p>id be glad to help,</p>

<p>you can PM or email</p>