I'd love some constructive criticism on my transfer essay.

<p>If any experienced posters here are available to evaluate my essay, I would certainly appreciate it. For a little background, I'm a current community college student about to get his AA. I did horrible in high school-I was going through a rough time. I'm not even sure what my GPA was. Also, my SAT scores were average.
My college GPA is 3.6. It isn't impressive, but considering I'm in school full time and working almost full time I think I came away pretty good. </p>

<p>Any help evaluating my essay would be appreciated.</p>

<p>Well, just believe in yourself. :-)</p>