<p>those of you that were accepted...how were your essays. I'm applying for transfer and I'm currently writing my "why vassar" essay. there are so many things I really love about this school, more so than any other school I've visited or researched but I don't know how to convey that in an essay. Does vassar like the "out-there" student or should I hold back and try not to let that side of me shine through too much.</p>
<p>AHHH</p>
<p>anyway, any current students (maybe someone who has transfered already?) who can help me out, let me know please. thanks.</p>
<p>good luck to anyone still waiting to find out.</p>
<p>I was just accepted EDII, I don't know what they require you to write for transfer, but when I applied I had sent in my common app essay,the why vassar one, and a yourspace. I was quite silly and witty on the common app one and the yourspace but I made my why Vassar fairly serious. I only wrote about a paragraph and I told about how I first found myself at Vassar. I do think though if it is the only original writing you are sending that you should let your talents shine.</p>
<p>would you possibly read my essays if you got an opportunity? I'm quite freaked out about this whole situation. I wanted some grammar help but mainly your opinion of the content. if not thanks anyway but if you could let me know.</p>
<p>Yea not a problem at all, just PM me. If you want I can probably even send you some of the stuff i sent in.</p>
<p>Thanks, I think I will take you up on that offer. I'll send my two essays to you on sunday.</p>