Im worried about my essay, will you take a look at it?

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone.</p>

<p>This is my main essay, and Im having difficulties trimming it down and making it flow well.</p>

<p>Will you guys read it and tell me what you think???</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>tell me if you will, and Ill pm it to you</p>

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<p>I'll check it out if you want.</p>

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<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>Anymore?</p>

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<p>I just read someone else's thread about suspecting that an essay was stolen by someone who volunteered to read it on CC. The preceding posters may have the best of intentions...but do you really want to take the chance? Ask someone you know and trust.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I can take a look</p>

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<p>Ill read it.</p>