<p>I'm applying to Haas/Bizecon and was hoping I could get some input on my personal statements. I feel like i'm almost done with both of them, but would like to know whether there is anything that sticks out that needs to be changed or something that is obviously missing. Grammar isn't really a concern, i'm mainly looking at the overall presentation.</p>
<p>Let me know if you're interested and i'll PM it over. Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>yeah, pm it along.</p>
<p>I can also take a look at if you want. I’ll take a look at it tomorrow at work.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind reading them, shoot me a pm</p>
<p>PM it over.
For a clearer picture, what are your stats?</p>
<p>lol ~thats the major i also gonna apply. pm me, if you want you can read mine also.
now i am totally stuck at the second topic</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over. I’m almost done with my second personal statement, so once I’m done maybe we can send each other our essays and help each other out with feedback, advice, etc.</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll help you.</p>
<p>PM me too </p>
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<p>PM me…I am also going for Berkeley :)</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, pm me.</p>
<p>So does anyone have any advice?</p>
<p>I’m going to UCI / UCD and I was wondering if someone can read my personal statement and tell me what you think / be critical about it! my email is andrew.ludwig91 @ gmail . com the spaces are so that my email isn’t ********* anyways. email me and ill send you my personal statement. thanks 
I’ll give you more information about major, etc. when i email you my statement.</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll take a look and let you know about my opinion</p>