Is anybody willing to read my UC essay?

<p>I wrote it for my common app essay topic of your choice, and I'm wondering if it will work for one of my UC essays. I'm just wondering if it successfully answers the prompt.</p>

<p>Prompt #2 (all applicants)</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>Please let me know if you can read it : )
Thanks!</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>sure. im applying too. but im done with my essays.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>