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<li><p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
(I did it about my love for America.)</p></li>
<li><p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
(I did it about my experience at Camp Pendleton over the summer)</p></li>
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<p>I'll PM whichever one you want to read or both just let me know. Thanks everyone! </p>
<p>I have critiqued a few common app essays so if you want, I can look at yours as well ( It might take me some time to send you a critique because I can get a bit busy due to a hectic schedule 
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<p>Send me whichever one you want and I will get back to you. This is University of Chicago, right? If it is, hope you had fun with 1 of those 6 prompts ;)</p>
<p>University of California actually xD @master1006 They don’t use common app, I don’t know if you still want to look at one or not.</p>
<p>I can read your 2nd prompt (:
read too many essays for the first prompt… lol.</p>
<p>I think I can read both. I should be a good resource as I was accepted at 7 UC’s last year (all except merced and riverside, to which I didn’t apply)</p>