Is anyone willing to proofread my USC essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
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<p>I'm applying to USC and I wrote my essay based on the prompt:</p>

<p>USC's speaker series What Matters to Me and Why asks faculty and staff to reflect on their values, beliefs, and motivations. Presenters talk about choices they have made, difficulties encountered and commitments solidified. Write an essay about an event or experience that helped you learn what is important to you and why it is important. </p>

<p>I would really appreciate the help! :)
If you're willing to, I'll PM you. Thank you!</p>

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<p>wrong forum dawg. screw the trojans</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I love USC. : ] but I do go to berkeley. haha</p>

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<p>sure, i’m up for reading it.</p>

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<p>USC…what a ■■■■■■■■ school.
No offence, but it’s really a bad school, especially for undergrad.
I mean UCB isn’t my first choice, but I can almost certaintly say UCLA UCSD or even UCB is better than USC. I would even go to UCI than USC LOL.</p>

<p>What a ■■■■■■■■ school…with a football team. Cannot believe that school is ranked higher than UCSD/UCLA. GIve me a break.</p>

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<p>Stun?</p>

<p>10char</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM me. :)</p>